Zach Wujcik
Outline
Intro Sentence: A good attention getting sentence on the importance of student/staff safety. Give research on Central Florida News as example.
Thesis: The safety of walking alone on a college campus has nationally been an issue. It should be our job as a student body to inform people on the danger and prevent fewer situations from happening.
· Touch small details (summary) on paragraphs.
· Wrap up with good concluded statement.
Paragraph 1: Background Information on Student Safety
· Research on past examples on different colleges and specially UCF. (examples of incidents)
· What has been done in the past to help students/staff on the issue?
· Quotes and sources on people’s opinions on the issue.
· Factual information (statistics)
· Wrap up ideas on conclusion sentence then give slight preview to next paragraph.
Paragraph 2: What UCF does and isn’t doing to protect its students/staff on campus.
· Find research and information on the call boxes. (purpose? Usage? Anyone who has used it?)
· Introduce S.E.P.S Program (tell benefits on it, interview an opinion)
· UCF’s response on why we have it.
· What UCF is doing to help its students in these circumstances?
Paragraph 3: What new ideas can help our student/staff from being better protected and informed?
· Get research on how this statement is true or false.
· Make up by my own ideas.
· Conclude on importance to help and gain a better knowledge as a student body.
Conclusion:
· Good attention getting sentence.
· Summarize 3 paragraphs.
· Wrap up ideas.
· Conclude with good statement.
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
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