My memo to the world,


Overall, my blog needs more detail. The introduction was just a taste of what is to come. I wasn't very specific in what I was writing about. I did set myself up but I really need to let the reader know what I'm writing about. Some of the suggestions I had was giving more detail on the upcoming football season. Which makes sense but I didn't play in the season. So I realized that I need to write down my thoughts and emotions of what I was going through after my injury. For example, before and after surgery. Watching the games on the sidelines and as well as my road to recovery. But I did think there was some positives in my introduction. I gave some background information on what is to become. I wrote some good details on my feelings on my memior. Ryan (my revisor) wrote down some good quotes that he thought gave good details on my story. I want the reader in my story to feel as though they are in my own shoes. That would mean they can relate to what I'm going though. That ultimately means that I am doing a good job explaining my position on my topic. I think it will be a little difficult going back and reflecting my thoughts on a tough part of my life. But I view it as a happy story and I am excited to tell people about it.

Sincerely,
Zach Wujcik